17A – Elevator Pitch No. 2
https://youtu.be/B9qItYdO1rY The most useful and insightful feedback I received was the recognition for my fear tactic that I had used in my first elevator pitch. A peer told me that it grabbed their attention immediately and made my cause appear more important. With that being said, I decided to again use the same tactic in my pitch and emphasis it more the 2 nd time around. I was also told that in my performance, I needed to be more serious about the beginning issues I state, so I tried changing my attitude a bit for the beginning of my pitch.